Project 3

 Here is my video for project 3! I definitely could have done more animation wise but I am kinda happy with how it turned out considering I was having a lot of trouble with my puppet t first. 












Comments

  1. I really like the puppet and the illustrations on the loons. The design looks really well done, I think some more movement would add to the final video.

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  2. This looks great, I love the drawings! I think one thing that would really bring it together is a surface for your narrator to stand on

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  3. The drawings look great! I just wish there was some sort of intro and outro to tie everything together

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  4. Love the fun facts! I agree with everyone above, having a surface for your guy to stand on would help him feel less out of place (even if he was just sitting on an inflatable raft or something), and having him gesture with his hands as he talked would make him feel a bit more lively. I think I can hear some background ambiance/music that you included, but it's very quiet and doesn't carry on to the end of the video to be noticeable enough.

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  5. Your character is very well done and matches the context very well. Great Job!

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  6. Wow, your artwork is so well done!! The video is very well put together. I agree with the others, it might be nice for him to have somewhere to stand.

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  7. Your loon illustrations were really well done as was the character. Giving the character a ground to stand on would put things into perspective more.

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  8. I agree with the others that your character just seems to be floating, but your different illustrations of the loon really help us understand what it is talking about! good job!

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  9. Your character looks so good, I just feel like he is kinda floating there, the illustrations are also really cool. the background music could also be a little louder.

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